Baron, I love the way you started off your elevator pitch. I also think it was very effective that you said you were a designer at University of Florida as that helped to build your credibility. One suggestion I have for you is to be cautious of what you are doing with your hands. You seemed to be fidgeting with them or playing with the buttons on your shirt often. Also in the background of your video, it sounded like water was running? I would just make sure you're in a quiet environment in the future. Overall amazing job!
Hi Baron, The way you started your elevator pitch was very strong. I think your idea is very creative and useful. One thing that I would suggest is to be careful with your body movements while presenting. When you do this, it makes it seem less professional. Other than that, I thought it was great. Can’t wait to hear more about your idea.
Baron,
ReplyDeleteI love the way you started off your elevator pitch. I also think it was very effective that you said you were a designer at University of Florida as that helped to build your credibility. One suggestion I have for you is to be cautious of what you are doing with your hands. You seemed to be fidgeting with them or playing with the buttons on your shirt often. Also in the background of your video, it sounded like water was running? I would just make sure you're in a quiet environment in the future. Overall amazing job!
Hi Baron,
ReplyDeleteThe way you started your elevator pitch was very strong. I think your idea is very creative and useful. One thing that I would suggest is to be careful with your body movements while presenting. When you do this, it makes it seem less professional. Other than that, I thought it was great. Can’t wait to hear more about your idea.